高考英语书面表达阅卷情况分析.pptVIP

修改意见: The English-Chinese Chinese- English Dictionary, which costs 52 RMB, has many examples. 1.合理利用介词或名词代替动词,能有 效降低句子的复杂性,在令句子通顺自 然的同时,也能减少语法错误。 试体会下面划线部分被括号内词语替代 后的效果。 (1)The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen. (with) (2)I was pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something that has taken place in our school. (about) (3)I have a surprise to give you. (for) 2.使用短语结构来简化从句或合并短句。 常见的结构有介词短语、名词短语、非 谓语动词、独立主格结构、同位语等结 构。 The young man pointed to a policeman not far away and said,He stopped us an hour ago and told us to catch the offender. 修改意见:Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us an hour ago and told us to catch the offender. (2) My brother was riding the bike and I sat on the seat behind him. 修改意见:My brother was riding the bike with me sitting on the seat behind. 3.通过合句,将意义相关的几个句子, 用一定的连接方式连接起来,或通过 紧缩,去掉一些多余的成分可以避免 冗长累赘,松散无力,使句子凝炼,层次 清晰。 I was walking along Park Road towards the east. At that time, an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. 修改意见:I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. (2)The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary have many examples. The price of ECCED is 52 RMB. (3)I heard you are learning Chinese. I very glad to hear that. 修改意见: I’m very glad to hear that you’re learning Chinese. * * 高考英语书面表达阅卷情况 分析与启示 一、试题特点 试题要求：假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典.根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信。 中国最常用的汉语字典 特点 11元 52元 价格 10,000 18,000(英语) 20,000(汉语) 收词(字) 新华字典 英汉/汉英词典 命题特点： 要求明确，审题容易，不易离题； 实用性强，情景真实；学生有话 可说，表达难度不大。 二、评分标准 （一）5分： I help you very happily. I recommend the English- Chinese Chinese-English dictionary. This Dictionary have 18000 English words and 20000 Chinese words. I recommend another dictionary is very good, too. That dictionary have 10000 chi