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中考英语作文常见的错误清单 1.审题错误 英语书面表达的审题十分重要。审题包括此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息,告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。由于英语书面表达的篇幅很有限,所以要求学生在写作时要精心组织材料,紧扣主题。不要产生偏题或者漏掉重要信息等问题。?? 【例文】：蒙山是山东著名的游览胜地，一年四季都有其独特的景色(scene)。尤其春天的景色更加迷人。每当春天来临,青山滴翠,美丽的景色吸引了许多游客前来踏青观光。可最近几年,游人不注意保护环境,乱扔垃圾,攀折树枝花草, ,点火野餐,致使自然环境遭到破坏。请你写篇报道,说明蒙山旅游环境的变化，号召人们文明旅游，保护生态环境。 【学生习作】： Mengshan Mountain is a famous place of interest in Shandong Province. It has its special scenes all the year round, especially in spring. When spring comes, the days get longer and longer and the weather get warmer and warmer. Trees are beginning to turn green, and all kinds of beautiful flowers come out. Everything begins to grow.?The mountains are covered with a lot of green tall trees and all kinds of colorful wild flowers. It is so beautiful that a lot of visitors come here and enjoy its beauty every day. But in recent years, some of the visitors paid no attention to protecting the environment. They threw lots of rubbish such as plastic bags, fruit skins and waste paper on the ground. They don’t know that cleaners work from morning till night to sweep away the rubbish and waste things. Sometimes they broke some branches, picked flowers and even killed birds. Some even made fires in the forest to cook food. How dangerous it was! Luckily, the local government has begun to do something to stop polluting the area. Great changes have taken place here. New roads and nice hotels have been built; trees and flowers are planted around them. I hope all the visitors can keep the idea in mind that we should protect the environment. 【问题分析】： 这就是属于审题不清，文章的中心偏离了主题。文章应围绕蒙山环境状况变化以及环境保护主题展开,与蒙山有关的春天的景色可以略写,但不宜用太多的笔墨去描绘春天的风景,这样就会冲淡主题。所以文章的第一段应该简写。同样在第二段中也没有必要去谈论清洁工是如何清理这些垃圾的，也没有必要谈论新的宾馆的建设及修路等情况，第二段的最后一句也应去掉，与主题无关。 【精彩例文】： Mengshan Mountain is a famous place of interest in Shandong Province. It has its special scenes all the year round, especially in spring. When spring comes, the mountains are covered with a lot of green tall trees and all kinds of colorful wild flowe