2016对口高考英语写作教案.pptVIP

Why do say it is a good article? Proper diary form./ tense / person Our common problems:尽量避免下列书面表达常犯错误： 1.文体,时态,人称 : incorrect diary style : incorrect tense: incorrect person : 2. 遗漏要点: poor content Grammatical mistakes The party was lasted 2 hours .(吕) I made friend with Jack. They song beautiful.(黄) …birthday cake played an important part of a party.(谢) When at 9:25, we sang a song to over the party.(冼) I always with a big smile in my face. I hope everyday will been happy same.(Mr.赖) Sunhua’s mother was busy to said hello to someone. In 9:30,we leaved her home.林 Write in Chinglish How can we write a good article? * Read the instructions carefully and decide the style, tense and person. (审题) * List the key points.(列要点) *Put the key points into sentences. (扩词成句) *Develop the sentences into passage.(扩句成文) -- Never make up new words and sentence patterns. Use exact adjectives, good verbs and proper phrases. Do use some effective conjunctions. Write in good logical order. Follow typical patterns. 高考第五档给分范围和要求: * 覆盖所有内容要求 *应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 *有效的使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑 *语法和结构方面有些许错误，但为尽量使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言应用能力 * Part1.Abrief introduction 作文现状简单介绍 Part3.How to get a composition of quality? 如何达到四档作文(及格分15-20)(常见错误分析) Part4 如何达到五档作文(优秀分21--25) Part5.实战操练 How to Get Your Composition Advanced Part2.what is the standard?高考作文根据什么给分? (fifth class)21—25marks : none (forth class)15—20marks :9 students (Miss吕嘉仪,20 marks ,the best) (third class)10--14marks : 32 students (second and first class) Below 10 marks :12 (0 mark: one student) A brief analysis (分析) of the composition papers: (third class)10--14marks : 32 students . 评分先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量.确定或调整档次,最后给分。 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 高考英语书面表达评分原则: Let’s see what the standard is . Miss 吕嘉仪 No obvious mistakes. Use exact adjectives, good verbs and proper phrases. Use different sentence structures. Wonderful sentences: We were so crazy a