考研基础写作part3-大作文剖析.ppt

段落的选择 介绍背景 产生原因 造成危害 解决方法 预测趋势 关于大学生就业问题 假冒伪劣商品问题 青少年吸烟问题 过渡捕捞问题 * 尽管他们很可怜，但是来自各个行业的人们向他们伸出了援助之手，这就是所谓的希望工程。 尽管？ 各行各业？ 所谓的？ Pathetic as they are, people (who are) coming from all walks of life began to help them, which is so called Hope Project. * 根据一项调查，每年希望工程所募集的资金价值￥。。。，这些钱可以。。。 According to the latest survey, money collected annually has reached as much as about $1,000,000,000, which can help 3 million children finish their primary school. * 如果没有这些帮助，那么这些孩子将永远无法得到宝贵的知识，永远生活在黑暗之中。 Were there no such precious help, those children would never taste the knowledge and live in the darkness forever. Were there no such precious help, never would those children taste the knowledge and live in the darkness forever. * 其他话题呢？ 义务鲜血 照顾老人 照顾伤残人 * 个人评价段落 写什么？ 讨论的对象是什么？ 怎么写？ * 好的现象 取其菁华，祛其糟粕。 Absorb the essence and neglect the drawbacks. * 坏的现象？－－解决之。 情况如此危急，解决这个问题刻不容缓。 首先，我们必须制订一些法律和法规。 第二，个人应该被教育。。。 伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，这个问题迟早可以被解决。 * 情况如此危急，解决这个问题刻不容缓。 The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem. * 首先，我们必须制订一些法律和法规。 On the one hand, it is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out. * 第二，个人应该被教育。。。 On the other, people should be educated to … * 伴随着一个恰当的法律和警觉的民众，这个问题迟早可以被解决。 With a proper law and an alert public, it will only be a matter of time before the problem becomes things of the past. Only in a reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy their life to the uttermost. * 总结 第一段描述图画（废话式开头＋倒装描写图画＋总结） 第二段，指出图画的寓意 －－举例子（拓展段落的三个方法） 第三段，发表评论。－－解决方法 （虚拟＋倒装） * * 有阳光的地方就有阴影 题目分析 写什么？ 阳光？阴影？ 段落安排？ 会不会跑题？ * 描述图画 There has been a heated discussion about a picture in the newspaper. As is shown above, in the sun shine stands a delicate tree, growing vigorously, leaving a long shadow behind itself. Just as the old Arab proverb says, where there is sunshine, there is a shadow. * 阐释寓意 Simple as the picture is, the symbolic meaning is as deep as