201106四级真题解析.docVIP

2011年6月大学英语四级考试真题解析 Part I Writing (30 minutes) 【名师支招】 这是一篇典型的说明类作文，要求考生先描述“现在网上购物已成为一种时尚”的现象，然后具体说明“网上购物的好处”以及“存在的问题”，这是全文的主体。最后结尾提出“我的建议”，以综述为宜。 根据写作要求，文章的结构安排如下：第一段开头段，描述“现在网上购物已成为一种时尚”的现象；第二段中间段，具体说明“网上购物的好处”以及“存在的问题”；第三段结尾段，综述全文，提出“我的建议”。 【范文赏析】 Online Shopping Ever since the beginning of this century, online shopping has prevailed around the world. Statistics show that over the past 10 years online shopping has been increasing by more than 5% every year. Now, it is a piece of cake to go shopping online through Taobao, Dangdang, etc. Many people, especially those who can easily get access to the Internet, accept online shopping as their first choice of shopping primarily because it is convenient and time-saving – staying at home, one may have a desirable deal done by several clicks on the computer. Another advantage is that online shops provide customers with varieties of commodities, quite enough to meet the needs of different people. However, just as a coin has two sides, online shopping is also bewildered with some problems. Firstly, safety is a big concern among most online shoppers. It is often the case that some online shops sell poor-quality or counterfeited goods. Also, delayed delivery and annoying after-service are what is most worried about. Actually, increasing complaints about online shopping have discouraged many online shoppers. While it is true that online shopping is confronted with serious problems and great challenges, it cannot be said that it should be kicked out of the market. If improvements in safety, quality and service could be made to online shopping, it would be embraced by more and more people. After all, the advantages of online shopping outweigh its disadvantages. 【亮点回放】 Statistics show that over the past 10 years online shopping has been increasing by more than 5% every year（划线部分意思为“统计表明”，一般用于补充说明对某种现象。类似表达法有Studies show that、A recent survey shows that最近调查显示等等）。 Another advantage is that online shops provide customers with var