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潘斌--华科同济医学院初二英语课程第二讲：作文写作精讲

作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇字：工整、清楚；词：不拼写错误；能适当掌握高级词汇；句：不出现语法错误；句子要逐渐使用复杂的从句句型，为文章添彩；段：段落内容有逻辑性；篇：合理安排文章布局；要有逻辑与联接；

Good–wonderful,excellent,gorgeous,fabulous,amazing,magnificent;Important–significant,essential,necessary,carryalotofweight;But—However,So—therefore,hence,3214绝对好用的替换词

Primarily,Firstly,oneofthemostessentialreasons,tostressfirst01Secondly,abovefromthefirstpoint,Inaddition02Thirdly,Lastbutnoleast,03Inconclusion,tomakeaconclusion,tosummarize…04

Forexample—Forinstance,totake….asanexample,tostateafactasanvividexample例

It’ssaidthat…01Nomatterwhat/which/who/where/when/whose+从句02Itis/was+被强调部分+that(who)+剩余部分03经典句型：

Ithappened(chanced)that+从句=sb.Happened/chancedtodosth.=sb.didsthbychance由as引导的非限制性定句从句/由where,when引导的定语从句12

It+谓语+时间段+before+主语+谓语(before引导的是时间状语从句）When/Solongas/Aslongas/Once+从句，+主句（从句也可放在主句之后）

倍数表达句型倍数+morethan,倍数+asmuchas..形容词、副词、名词+as/though+主语+谓语+主句Nosooner+had+主语+done…than+主语+did

要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点”,就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇这两道关。句式要有变化。改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语放在句首，或用分词作状语等。句式多变化

[原文]Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.[修正]Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.

[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.12

在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语从句等。强调句[原文]MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.Ithadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.[修正]MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.

由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中文中的“所……”，有很强的概括，如：[原文]Wehadtostandheretocatchoffender.[修正]Whatwehadtodowas(to)standthere,tryingtocatchtheoffender.

Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.由with或without引导的短语。如：Satisfiedwiththeresult,hedicidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.分词短语．如：

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