高中英语作文之谴词造句.pptx

HIGH SCHOOL LETTER WRITING SKILL-----wording and making a sentence高中英语写作之遣词造句篇 As the saying goes,“Food and fodder should go ahead of troops and horses.”What is the foodstuff （粮食）of a composition？words 假定你是红星中学高三（1）班的李华， 上月借了好友Kate 的书“Gone with the wind ”本要在今天归还给他，却因表妹强行借走了故要写信致歉好友Kate。注意：1. 词数不少于100词； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和已给出，不计入总词数。STEP1. What is the kind of the letter? apologysuggestionapplicationa letter ofintroductioninvitationSTEP2.WORDING 1.write to do 写信是为了2.return.... to … 把...归还3.be about to …when …正要...就在此时...4.be interested in/ be fond of/ with great interest对...有兴趣5.be your parden/say sorry to 向...说对不起STEP3.making sentences 1.How is everything going?2.be about to …when …3.have no choice but …4.I sincerely hope that …5.Thank sb for sth.Dear Kate, How is everything going? I am writing to beg your parden for my long delaying in returning to you “Gone With the Wind” ，which I read through with great interest. I had already finished reading the book and was about to return it to you when my cousin came to see me.Never having seen the book,she was so interested in it that I had no choice but to allow her to finish the book. I hope that in view of additional delight thus afforded by your book,you will overlook my negligence(疏忽） in not returning it sooner. I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation . Thank you again for your loan. Sincerely yours, LIHUA目的(purpose)主体(body)交际性语句(communicativesentence)结尾语(ending)(signature)STEP4.高考应用文评分原则 内容是否______ 条理是否______ 交际是否______ 语言是否______完整清楚得体准确 EXAMPLE2. 假定你是某中学高三（1）班的李华， 假期里你参加了一次“伦敦游学”活动。请根据下列提示给你的同学王明写封信，向他介绍整个游学过程。时间内容7月20早到达机场；受到接待家庭 (home-stay family) 的热烈欢迎第二天参观牛津大学(Oxford University)，听教授介绍学校第三天游览大本钟和伦敦眼 (Big Ben)；照相留念最后一天与英国学生开告别晚会注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Tell the advantages disadvantagesgive them marks! letter structure evaluation standards!Passage A: Dear Wang Min, During the vacation, I took part in an interesting activity. My school organiz