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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA 2011年12月沪江英语六级统一线上模考作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1) 目前有些校园内浪费严重 2) 浪费的危害 3) 从我做起，杜绝浪费 参考范文： Reduce Waste on Campus Nowadays, there is too much waste on some campus. You can see students leaving their dorms with lights on. You also find that many a student, after washing their clothes, doesnt bother to turn off the tap, leaving the water running. If you go to the cafeteria at dinner time, you are likely to see tables covered with the remains of all kinds of food. Waste is very harmful. If you are?extravagant?with your money, you will soon be poor. Likewise, if human beings recklessly?exploit?the natural resources, then they are sure to have a gloomy future. Whats more, being wasteful is a bad habit that, like a drug, gradually?erodes?a human beings virtures. Once a person grows wasteful, the virture offrugality?is eroded within him. As far as I am concerned, I am determined to set a good example to combat waste, trying to use every grain and cent and call on more schoolmates to realize the necessity and importance of frugality. Only in this way, I think, can we hope to put an end to the waste on campus as soon as possible. 这篇模考作文题目是近年来六级常考的话题，与校园有关的热点或者有争议的话题。例如，2010年6月和2011年6月考查了与大学生息息相关的热点问题，分别是：学生忽视中文学习的问题和考证热的问题；2010年12月的考题则是校园热点话题：关于大学排名的问题。因此，这类话题作文，值得引起注意和重视。 具体来说，考生在体裁以及段落构成方面，基本上采取现象描述+问题的严重性、危害性+措施的三段论形式即可。虽然看起来在难度上不是很大，但如果只是事先背过一些模板而没有亲自动手练习的话，作文分数会受到严重影响。因此，这里提醒考生，切记生搬硬套模板，而是要言之有物，有闪光点，有主题句，尽量表达多样化。 以范文为例。在第一二段的描述现象和阐明危害性中，段首均有主题句，一目了然。尤其是“harmful”一词，简单明了地对段落做出了总的概括。另外，谈论危害性时，还可以用到的词汇和表达有：be harmful to，do harm to，be unfavorable to，have side effect on，the disadvantage of…。在接下来围绕主题句展开时，第一要点是选择两到三个方面和角度来进行准确的表达和清楚的描述。由于考生身处校园之中，对校园浪费现象，比较熟悉且有话可说。可能除了范文第一段中所谈到的 “不关灯”、“不关水笼头”和“食物浪费”等现象，考生还会想到“大量打印造成的纸张浪费”、“长时间离开却不关电脑”、“外卖时经常使用一次性碗筷”等等，这就要求考生不是面面俱到，而是选择自己最擅长表达的两到三个方面，确保行文