[英语考试]雅思写作常用句型.pptVIP

图表作文 Warm-up Exercise Cambridge 6, Test 2, Writing Task 1 Points to Note: 1.Seven modes, plus “others” and the totals for all modes. 2.Distances are given per person per year. 3.Some modes see an increase while others see a decrease. 4.The total for all modes increases significantly, largely due to increased use of cars. Suggestions 1.The introduction should be short and general. 2.The body should consist two paragraphs – one for modes that have seen an increase in use and one for modes that have seen a decrease. Writing a paragraph for each mode would lead to numerous short paragraphs. 3.The conclusion should be short. It should note the overall increase and the fact that this was mainly due to the increase in the use of cars. 1.In the introduction, “modes” is changed into “means”. It is important to be able to use synonyms. 2.” The numbers of miles walked, cycled and travelled by local bus all decreased.” Note that the table uses nouns (walking, bicycle, local bus), which the writer changes to verbs. 3.The number of miles driven by car was … in 2000.” The writer indicates the change using a percentage. 4.The writer uses “doubled” and “trebled” to indicate the scale of increases. It is good to use a variety of methods to show changes. Are there too many “the number of miles…” structure in this sample answer? How do you think you can diversify the structure? What other problems do you find with this sample answer, suggest how to improve it. Test 3, Writing Task 1 Points to Note: 1. The stages in the life cycle of the silk moth are numbered and run anti-clockwise. 2.The stages in the production of silk cloth run from top to bottom. 3. Vocabulary is included in the diagrams – nouns for the life cycle and verbs and nouns for the production. 4. The cocoons, being made of silk thread, are the link between the two diagrams. 5.When describing the first diagram, do not forget to include the periods of time between each stage. Suggestion Begin with a brief intro