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书面表达经典例文及实用句型收藏【真题再现1】 你喜欢过生日吗？你的生日过得开心吗？每个人都曾有难以忘怀的生日。请以My Birthday为题写一篇短文，介绍你最开心、最难忘的一次生日，让大家分享你生日的快乐。（2011年衡阳卷） 要求：1. 词数：80左右； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。 【参考范文1】： My Birthday March 5th is my birthday. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning，I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school，I helped my deskmates to repair their broken chairs. After school，I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again. What a joyful birthday it was! 点评：这是一篇记叙文，作者第一句话就交代了生日的时间，开门见山，直奔主题，值得学习。然后说明庆祝生日的方式与往年不同，接着以时间（in the morning，at school，after school）为主线详细阐述其不同点。最后用感叹句表达自己的感受，同时也表达了帮助别人的意义。短文思路清晰、语言简洁、主题突出、结构完整。 【真题再现2】 假如你是图片中的人物，请你根据图画内容及所给提示，完成下面的日记。（2011年湘潭卷） June 7th Tuesday Sunny I got up late this morning. My alarm clock didnt work. 【参考范文2】： June 7th Tuesday Sunny I got up late this morning. My alarm clock didnt work. When I woke up，it was 7:10. So I washed my face quickly and ran to the bus stop without breakfast. By the time I got there，I missed the school bus because it had already gone. So I had to walk to school. Finally，when I got to school，it was already 9:10. I was late for class. When the teacher asked for my homework，I found I had left it at home. What a bad day it was! 点评：该篇是日记式应用文，为常考的文体。作者根据图片提示的内容，清楚地交代了周二早上发生的事情。最大亮点在于时间状语的使用多样。如：when I woke up，by the time I got there，finally等。含过去完成时的复合句运用也非常恰当。最后的感叹句What a bad day!抒发了作者的感受。 【真题再现3】 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力。为了更好地发现及解决同学们存在的心理压力问题，学校特意举行了一次以Less Pressure，Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学们分享，内容包括： 1. 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么； 2. 你的压力是什么； 3. 你是如何缓解压力的。 注意：文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。（浙江省台州卷） Hello，boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. That’s all. Thank you! 【参考范文3】： Less Pressure，Better Life