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修改前： As soon as came in, we heard some voice made by instruments. There were some students playing piano violin and so on . 修改后： As soon as we came in, we heard a piece of beautiful music played by the students by different instruments, such as, piano, violin and so on. 4 过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑 性，可读性。 修改前 Yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy. 修改后 Yesterday, a policeman stopped a car—Honda at the corner of the street, because it nearly knocked down a boy who was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk. 修改前 Suddenly, a car run quickly from the third street and turned to the west. The car didn’t stop and hit the old man. The driver didn’t stop and have a look. The car ran away quickly. The car was yellow and the driver was a woman. 修改后 Suddenly, a car turned west from the 3rd Street to the Park Road. It hit the old man, but it didn’t stop and ran away quickly. I noticed the car was yellow and the driver was a woman. * OPEN-ENDING COMPOSITION 开放性写作出题方式： 1 根据结果，解释原因 What happened? 2根据事件，接续故事 What happened next? What did you do with...? What should you do...? How will you introduce your school to them? 3提出问题，给出建议 写作注意原则： 1、认真审题，即：审语境、审人称、审时 态 2、要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应 3、注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的 意识 4、要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑 5、要有主次之分， 详略得当 6、要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑 7、要做到思想健康，积极向上 海淀二模： When your mother comes home from work., she finds the living room in a terrible mess. She asks you the reasons. You tell her what happened. 审题：人称-- I, 时态 -- 过去时 叙事--- 根据结果，解释原 因。 切记： 1 审题要准；定位要清。 2 紧扣主题；首位呼应。 3 内容充实；详略得当。 4 合情合理；逻辑清晰。 5 语言简洁；交际得体。 说明文 说明文出题形式： 1。文字+表格 2。图表 3。图画 说明文的篇章结构 主题句——引出全文的话题 支持句——围绕话题展开讨论，用事实，理由，观点等来进行解释，说明或论证。 结束句——对话题进行概括，总结归纳。 说明文的写作方法： 列举法----用事例说明主题可用表示顺序的示意词来突出每个实例。如：