英语写作中典型的病句实例.pptVIP

英语写作中典型的病句实例 1 disagreements 不一致 所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致，还包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致等。例如： When one have money, he can do what he want to. 剖析：one 是单数第三人称，因而本句的have 应改为has;want应改为wants. 改为：Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do). 英语写作中典型的病句实例 2 Sentence Fragments 句子不完整 There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on. 剖析：本句后半部分“For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 改为：There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper. There are many interesting performances in the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. For example, cross talk, short sketch,Peking Opera and so on. 改为：There are many interesting performances in the CCTV Spring Festival Gala，for example, cross talk…… 英语写作中典型的病句实例 3 Dangling Modifiers 悬垂修饰语 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。例如： At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 剖析：句子中“at the age of ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说明“谁”十岁时。 改为：When I was ten, my grandfather died. To do well in college, good grades are essential. 剖析：句子中不定式短语“to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚。 改为：To do well in college, a student needs good grades. 3 Dangling Modifiers 悬垂修饰语 As the most important festival, people always have a lot of ways to celebrate the Spring Festival. 改为：As the most important festival, the Spring Festival can be celebrated in a lot of ways. 英语写作中典型的病句实例 4 Run-on Sentences 不间断句子 There are many ways we get to know the outside world. 剖析：这个句子包含两层完整的意思：“There are many ways.” 以及“We get to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起很不妥当。 改为：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world./ There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world. There are many people show no interest in the Gala. 改为：There are many people that show no interest in the Gala. 英语写作中典型的病句实例 5 Redundancy 累赘 写作时避免多余的词和不必要的句子。例如： For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need. 剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。 改为：Diligent, caring people use money