续写 阿香与婆婆 2017.12 maggie.pptVIP

ht * ht * Maggie 读后续写: 提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词续写一篇150词左右的短文。（满分25分） 新高考考试说明 本题总分为25分，分5个档次给分 第五档(21-25) 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确， 可能有些错误，但完全不影响意义表达。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。 高融洽度 tone (情节基调) language characteristics(语言特征) content (内容: plot development -- “W H”) Step 1. Read for basic information Long long ago, in China , a girl named A Xiang got married and went to live with her husband and mother-in-law (婆婆). After a short time, A Xiang found that she couldn’t get along with her mother-in law at all . Their character and lifestyle were completely different . On one hand , A Xiang was often angered by her mother-in-law . On the other hand , her mother-in-law frequently blamed her . Day after day , they kept arguing and fighting . A Xiang’s husband got more and more unhappy , but had nothing to do about it . Finally , A Xiang couldn’t stand her mother-in –law and decided to do something about it . She paid a visit to her father’s good friend , Mr Yan, a doctor . She told him the situation at her home . She asked him if he could give her some poison so that she could solve the problem once and for all . Mr Yan thought for a moment and finally said ,”h Xiang , I’d like to help you ,but you must obey what I tell you .’A Xiang nodded her head . Mr Yan went into his back room and came back in several minutes with a package of herbs in his hands . . Step 1. Read for basic information He said to A Xiang , “we can’t use a quick –acting poison to kill your mother-in-law . That will be very dangerous for us. So here are some herbs that will increase poison in her body little by little . Every day you prepare some delicious meals and put a few herbs in her bowl. To make sure that nobody suspects you when she dies , you must be as friendly to her as possible . Don’t argue with her and obey every wish