2013届高三写作教学.pptVIP

讨论 高考作文优秀文的特点是什么？ 高考作文考查哪些写作能力？ 学生写作能力弱的问题是什么？ 讨论 高考作文优秀文的特点是什么？ 扣题 流畅 有思想 有逻辑 用词恰当 讨论 学生写作能力弱的问题是什么？ * 书面表达 In my opinion the competition in the area of grades is distracting. It distracts many students from their goal, which is to obtain an education that is good. There seems to be a belief among a few students that grades are more important than what is measured by them. The competition for grades distracts many students from their goal of obtaining a good education. A few students seem to believe that grades are more important than what they measure. * * 书面表达 Tell vs. Show more than tell 内容 vs. 形式 句式的复杂 vs. 句式的多样 * * 书面表达 语言的基本功 基本词汇 5个基本句式 用最简单的话表达最丰富的含义 通过形容词，副词增加写作的效果 用具体的实例说明想表达的内容 增强写作的逻辑性 主题句 连接词 冗余信息 * * 书面表达 语言的基本功 基本词汇 5个基本句式 条条道路通罗马 * * 书面表达 The earth trembled. The earthquake destroyed the city. The result was chaos. The government sent the city aid. The citizens considered the earthquake a disaster. * * 书面表达 他是谁我不关心。 I don’t care who he is. Who he is doesn’t concern me. * * 书面表达 他还没有解释他为什么来得那么晚。 He didn’t explain why he was/came so late. Why he was so late has not been explained. It was not explained why …. * * 书面表达 语言的基本功 基本词汇 5个基本句式 用最简单的话表达最丰富的含义 (内容？语言？) 通过形容词，副词增加写作的效果 用具体的实例说明想表达的内容 增强写作的逻辑性 主题句 连接词 冗余信息 * * 词汇积累三：using dictionary There is nothing but clouds in the sky. Which picture may appear in your mind? adj. A B C D * * There is nothing but_______ clouds in the sky. adj. ◇ dense, heavy, thick ◇ fluffy ◇ high, low ◇ broken, scattered ◇ fast-moving, scudding ◇ black, dark, grey, white * * Which picture may appear in your mind? There is nothing but heavy clouds in the sky. A B C D * * 书面表达 The earth trembled. The earthquake destroyed the city. The result was chaos. The government sent the city aid. The citizens considered the earthquake a disaster. * * 书面表达 Recently, the earth trembled. The earthquake nearly destroyed the old city. The result was chaos. The government soon sent the city aid. The frightened