2025秋高考英语复习写作分类指导专题三写作提升第五节细节与逻辑课件.pptVIP

专题三写作提升第五节细节与逻辑

在英语书面表达中，增加细节内容描写是必不可少的。在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能只是简单地翻译或者仅仅完成题目所要求的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写地描述图片内容，否则很有可能造成内容不充实丰富、词数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。适当增加细节内容，能够使文章流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。增加细节内容的具体方法如下：※增加时间、地点等细节我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。

Ihavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturn.→IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(增加地点)［跟踪练习1］根据所给出的汉语提示完成句子1.(这一次)，scientistswillprofitfromthedata，andwe’recreatingaplatforminwhichtoengageasmanypeopleaspossibleinwhat’shappening (在北冰洋).?ThistimeintheArcticOcean

2.TheChineseSilkRoad，(以今天的西安为起点)andfinallyfinishesattheeastcoastoftheMediterranean，iswell-knowntotheworld.?3. (一到机场)，ImeetafriendIhaven’tseenforlong.?4.Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthecity (一……就……)Iarrivedhereat6o’clockinthemorningbyplane.?whichstartsfromtoday’sXi’anOnarrivingattheairportthemoment/immediately/assoonas/directly

※增加原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容(1)我会读点书。I’lldosomereading.→I’lldosomereadingforfun，andforknowledgeaswell.(补充原因)(2)我会参加一些社交活动。I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.→Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(条件状语)→Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(结果状语)

(3)特雷西来电话说，博尔顿咖啡屋见面取消。Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee.→Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehassomethingimportanttodealwith.(原因状语)(4)我也帮助邻里的孩子补习英语。IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighbourhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.→IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighbourhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy，theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme.(增添结果)

［跟踪练习2］根据所给出的汉语提示完成句子1.TombSweepingDay，(中国传统节日之一)，usuallyfallsaroundApril5everyyeartohonorthedeadandsatisfytheirancestors.?2.(伴随着全球