【课件】高中英语读后续写方法指导课件.pptVIP

“Ill treat you today,” said the man. He brought her a bowl of noodles, the smell so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.?“What is it?”?asked the man kindly. “Actually I was just touched by your kindness!”?said Jenny as she wiped her tears. “Even a stranger will give me a bowl of noodles, while my mother drove me out of the house.” Hearing the words, the man smiled, “I only gave you a bowl of noodles. But it is your mother who has raised you since you were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your thankfulness to her？” Jenny sat there, speechless；she remembered her mothers familiar face. “A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful(感激的). Why havent I thanked my mum for what she has done for me?” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology(道歉) to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home. Paragraph 1： Approaching?the?doorway, Jenny?took?a?deep?breath._________________________________________ Paragraph 2： A?gentle?touch?on?her?hair?called?her?mind?back. ___________________________________________ How did she feel?what did she do? What did Jenny do before her mother came back? What would she do? 第一步，迅速获取故事情节（5W+1H) 1.Who: Jenny, mother,a stranger 2.When: one afternoon 3. Where: 3. What: quarrel with her mother,a stranger gave her a bowl of noodels when she was hungry. 4.Why:the strangers word reminded Jenny of what her mother had done. 5.How: Jenny felt regretful and decided to make an apology. 第二步，理清人物情感变化。 第二步，理清人物情感变化 Storyline How did Jenny feel about her mother? Beginning: quarrelled, ran out(para1) angry Development: a stranger, a bowl of noodles(para2) mean and cruel Climax :Strangers words, mothers love(para34) regretful and grateful Later development: went home(para5)? ? Paragraph 1 Approaching the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath.When she knocked at the door, she found the door was locked and her mother was not in. Tired and sad, she sat