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HYPERLINK TPO-13综合写作高分范文（附模板）【博主原创-转载请署名】 Posted on HYPERLINK /archives/344 \o pm 5:10 2010 年 10 月 29 日 by HYPERLINK /archives/author/tpoooo/ \o View all posts by TPOOOO TPOOOO Sample answer to TPO-13 integrated writing task The lecturer rejects the ideas presented in the reading passage about the problems involved with the booming business of commercial fossil trading. In her opinion, the benefits of this new development outweigh its negative consequences. The lecturer does not agree with the first point made in the reading-that private collectors will keep their fossil collection away from the public. She contends that the commercial trading of fossils actually makes them available to a wider public, because everyone with a budget, such as private schools and libraries, can purchase them for study and exhibition. The lecturer goes on to refute the claim in the reading that fossil trading business prevents scientists and public museums from benefiting from fossil finds, as these parties cannot compete with wealthy private buyers to acquire important fossils for research purpose. On the contrary, she argues, scientists themselves are the first to evaluate any important fossil before it can be sold in the commercial market at a price, so the academic community does not miss any opportunity to study privately traded fossils. Additionally, the lecturer challenges the final downside of fossil trading mentioned in the reading. The lecturer reminds us that the damages, if any, caused by private collectors in their field operations are more than offset by the effort they have made to increase the number of fossils available to the public that would otherwise remain undiscovered. 本篇范文可以借鉴的模板是： The lecturer rejects the ideas presented in the reading passage about ________________. In her opinion, the benefits of ________outweigh its negative consequences. The lecturer does not agree with the first point made in the reading—that __________. She contends that _________,