求职信的细节问题.docxVIP

求职信的细节问题 写求职信的目的在于获得职位，一封求职信无论如何 文辞并茂，令人心动，公司HR主管不见到应聘者本人是不 会给予工作机会的。因此，求职信的实际目的在于获得面 谈的机会。许多人都会copy网上的求职信范本，导致千篇 一律，这是非常不可取的。我们已经讲过怎样写求职信， 这次我们来谈谈求职信写作中容易被忽略的细节问题。 一、求职信的第一段说明写信的目的，有些专家认为 不宜用分词句子，比如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的 句子被人用得大多，显得陈腐，失去特点。 Replying toyouradver tisement? Answeringyo uradvertise ment? Bell evingthatth ereisanoppo rtunity? T hinkingthat thereisavac ancyinyourc ompany. Havi ngreadyoura d. 再比较下面三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修 改后(2)句显得比较恰当。 A: (1)Replyi ngtoyourrec entadvertis ementintheB ostonEvenin gGlobe, Iwis htoapplyfor theposition ofsalesmana ger? (2) la mapplyingfo rthepositio nofsalesman ager? Ibelie vemyqualifi cationswill meetyourexa. ctingrequir ements? B: ualifiedfor thiswork. (1)Ibelieve afterreadin gyouradvert isementinth ismorning5 s Journalthat pportimityl amlookingfo r.(2)Your advertiseme alforanadju stmentmanag thispositio n.C:(l)Ha vingreadyouYorkTimesfo ranaccountanterestedin myapplicati on.(2) Inyouradvertis (1)Ibelieve afterreadin gyouradvert isementinth ismorning5 s Journalthat pportimityl amlookingfo r. (2)Your advertiseme alforanadju stmentmanag thispositio n. C: (l)Ha vingreadyou YorkTimesfo ranaccounta nterestedin myapplicati on. (2) Iny ouradvertis ouindicated tentperson, ostaccounti theposition thatyourequ withthoroug ng.Pleaseco .Herearemyr youareoffer ntinthismorerpromptedm radvertisem nt,Ithoughtementforana iretheservi htrainingin nsidermeana easonsforbe ingjusttheo ning sjourn etoapplyfor entintheNew youmightbei ccountant,y cesofacompe thefieldofc pplicantfor lievinglamq 二、在提到希望得到的待遇时，可用类似的句子： r dprefer nott ose tasa. lary, but sin ceyouask, Ic onsider6, 50 Oamonthtobe satisfactor y. It shar dformetosay whatmysalar yshouldbese tat, butifpr essedlwould havetoaskfo ramonthasan initialsala ry. Idon，t feelthatlsh ouldsetmyow nsalary, asl amhappyenou ghtohavethe privilegeof workingfory ou. However, Iwouldconsi deramonthsa tisfactorye ompensation formyappren ticeship? 三、 提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意，下 列句子不宜使用： Asforsalary , Idonotknow whattosay. W ou