第一课：环保类作文教案终稿.ppt

牛从何吹起？写作步骤 Step 1：吹什么牛？审题---解决问题型 Step 2：吹牛要打草稿----立大纲 Step 3：开始吹-----开始动笔 （三个高分秘诀牢记心中！） Step 4：吹完再看看----检查语法错误 Step 1：审题 请思考几个问题 A：全文分为几个部分？ B: 每个部分的主要内容是什么？ C: 那个部分是重点？ 模板驾到 一 解决问题类作文超给力模板 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 １． 问题现状 ２． 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点) What: In recent days, we have to face a more and more serious problem-----A. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) How to solve: Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope it. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Summary(call on):Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because -------------- (带来的好处)/ let’s …. together!. Step 2：draft Outline: MM Spider net 蜘蛛图 How to conserve our 环境 Problems solutions air water Use clean energy Reuse water 观点类开头 开门见山：摆现象。 用数据和事实。 时态：现在时 语态：适合使用被动语态 开头点 当前 Today， Now At present， Nowadays, Recently, In recent days, 随着A的发展 With the fast development of A,…. As the benefit of A arises, …. With the rapid growth of A…. 仿写： With the fast development of the Internet B问题正变得越来越突出 The problem B is becoming more and more serious The problem B grows increasingly serious 仿写：The destruction to our environment is becoming more and more serious. C正被D逐渐的破坏 C is being destroyed by D 用上文plastic bags的问题来写： Our environment is being destroyed by the increasing use of plastic bags. 分析：亮点用到被动语态进行时 版本13分 Today，we make our environment worse and worse。 分析：做开头没有亮点，只能得基本分。 16分版本 Nowadays， with the development of the economy， more and more destruction is being done to our planet. 分析: 有亮词：nowadays;有亮词组 with The development of the economy,有被动。 满分版本 In recent days, due to the rapid growth of the economy，our only planet，the Earth， is being increasingly destroyed by the unlimited use of plastic bags. 中间：过渡到解决方法： Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. 面对： in face of, faced wit