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Unit3 Writing—关注信/ 慰问信 拟要点、列提纲 层次： 1. Express your understanding, 2. Offer your suggestions 3. your hope/encouragement 关注信 第一段，对不幸表示同情和慰问或理解 第二段，所能提供的帮助/适当提出自己的建议(语气一定要委婉） 第三段，表示鼓励/简单的希望或祝福 近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响 1 … 2 … 3 … 作文步骤： 审---列---扩译 ---连----改----誊 审： 1）时态： ________ 2) 体裁： ________ 3) 人称_______________ 一般现在时 关注信/慰问信 第二称 Step 2 核心词汇 每个人都会有这么一段时间，一切好像都变得非常糟糕。 Everyone will have one of those periods when everything seems to be going wrong. one of those periods/ go wrong 没有必要担忧。(it作形式主语) it is unnecessary to do sth It is unnecessary to be worried. 你应学会自控，这会帮你避免去说或做你将后悔的事 self-control/ avoid doing/ regret You should learn self-control and it can help avoid saying and doing something that you’ll regret. 改写：which 引导的非限制性定义从句 You should learn self-control ，which can help avoid saying and doing something that you’ll regret You should learn self-control and it can help avoid saying and doing something that you’ll regret. 与老师和朋友分享心情是个不错的选择，因为这样做可以消除你的消极情绪。（it 作形式主语，as引导原因状语从句） It is a good choice to share your feelings with your friends and teachers as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so. share your feelings with /remove your negative emotions 用动名词作主语改写 Sharing your feelings with your friends and teachers is a good choice as you can remove your negative emotions by doing so. take physical exercise/ lift your spirit/nourish your spirit ?你应当多锻炼身体，这可让你振作精神 You should take more physical exercise, which can lift /nourish your spirits. 保持乐观的生活态度，你将享受生活给你的快乐 keep …attitude / enjoy the happiness/ pleasure If you keep an optimistic attitude towards life, you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you. 改写：祈使句+and/or+陈述句(一般将来时） Keep an optimistic attitude towards life and you will enjoy the pleasure life has brought to you 希望我的建议对你有益 I hope my suggestion will be good for you be good for/ benefit/ beneficial I hope my suggestion will benefit you 祝你很快消除烦恼 May you g