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技能：1、想到可写的内容：头脑风暴法【方法】Step1：拼命风暴，不做批评；Step2：选择最简单的条目来写！2、造出正确的句子把要点“句子化”！！！英语句子的基本结构：（1）谁做了什么。（2）谁是什么。（3）谁被做。（汉语中的无主句要变成英语中的被动句）【步骤】（1）找信息点（2）造成句子：主干（3）添加枝叶无主句：（车窗外）看到很多鲜花绿草。被动句：很多鲜花绿草被看到（在车窗外）。A lot of flowers and grass are seen outside the car window.3、融入加分的亮点（1）前面添一添：黄金圣衣句型It is clear that…很明显“清”It is obvious that…很明显“明”There is no doubt that…毫无疑问“疑”No one can deny…不容否认“否”Needless to say,…不用说“不用”It goes without saying that…不用说“走”（2）后面补一补：白银裤衩句型“因为，以防，所以，为了，如果，只要，这件事儿”因为：…, in that…. ; … considering that…; … ,for…以防：…for fear that…所以：…; as a result,… ; …; therefore,… ; …; consequently,…+不好的结果为了：…, so that…如果：…, if…只要：…, as long as…这件事：…, which…注意：一定要补充简单的内容！一定要造出完整的句子！【练习】我们可以选择自己喜欢的老师，因为网上有很多老师。We can choose the teacher that we like, in that there are a lot of teachers on the Internet.我们可以选择自己喜欢的老师，以防我们不想学习。It is obvious that we can choose our favorite teachers, for fear that we don’t want to study.我们可以选择自己喜欢的老师，所以互联网是个好的学习平台。It is obvious that we can choose our favorite teachers; as a result, the Internet is a good study platform.我们可以选择自己喜欢的老师，为了我们更想学习。It is obvious that we can choose our favorite teachers, so that we want to study.我们可以选择自己喜欢的老师，如果我们找打一家网上学校。It is obvious that we can choose our favorite teachers, if we can find an online school.我们可以选择自己喜欢的老师，只要我们找打一家网上学校。It is obvious that we can choose our favorite teachers, as long as we can find an online school.我们可以选择自己喜欢的老师，这件事儿是很重要的对于我们的学习兴趣。It is obvious that we can choose our favorite teachers, which is important for our study interest.4、进行合理的布局：（1）全文：两到三段（2）段落：总分结构【标准段落模式】 ……….主题句………… First and foremost, there is no doubt that拓展句1, which is not only meaningful but also entertaining. Additionally, no one can deny 拓展句2, so that……. Last but not least, it is obvious that 拓展句3; as a result,… 【过渡词】分两点讨论：For one thing,… For another,…分对立的两点：On the one hand,… On the other hand,…分三点讨论：First and foremost,… Additionally,…Last but not least,…分四点讨论：To begin with,… Besides,… What’s more,.. Finally,…【范文】Directions； Fo