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主体段内展开本段主题句（分论点）+说理（逻辑解释）+例证（具体化主题句或说理）+小结润色主题句的方式：加从句（让步状语，定语从句）travelingabroad reduces pressure. even though I might get exhausted along the way, traveling abroad reduces pressure.despite the exhaustion along the way, 解释说明主题句当中的某个概念travelingabroad, which means exploring other wonderlands in the world, reduces pressure.放在主题句之后，对其进行同意转述或补充说明travelingabroad reduces pressure, which means that I could get fully energetic and recharged again after a trip overseas. 加修饰成分（名词被形容词，后置定语，定语从句来修饰, 动词被副词修饰，形容词被副词修饰）I have enough water. I have water enough to drink.The girl who is in red is my good friend.The girl who is wearing red clothes The girl hit by himtravelingabroad significantly reduces mounting/tremendous/enormous psychological pressurefrom repetitive/endless work that is draining all my energy and boring study that is overwhelmingly hitting me.加破折号对内容举例travelingabroad—the US, Singapore, Japan, etc., reduces pressuredo you agree:it is necessary for students to participate in organizations and clubs. Sp 1. 参加课外活动能扩大学生们的知识面。Even though students will have to sacrifice some of the individual spare time, still, attending various sorts of extracurricular activities, such as debating teams and environmental campaigns, could by and large expand students’ knowledge scope, some of which cannot even be obtained from the academic courses. 主题句：自己做决定能培养小孩独立的人格。Books means authorized knowledge. Authorized knowledge brings us correct information. Correct information helps us get rid of detours. No detours means improving efficiency. Group 1Books—historic, scientific and literal books,etc, which mean authorities, bring us correct, abundant and comprehensive knowledge to avoid the detours, leading to high efficiency.定语从句简单句：动词简单句：结果（伴随）状语Group 2Books contain systematic knowledge， which can be learnt consistently, so the students can comprehend knowledge all aroundedly, which is a requirement of high efficiency in studying.简单句：动词定语从句状语从句soI came here so that I can improve.Group 3Enormo