英语写作常见错误1.ppt

Problematic Writings (one) misplacement of the comma and the period In printed English, the comma or the period closely follows the preceding word and is followed by a space. I love you , really. Do you love me? I love you ,really. Do you love me? I love you, really.Do you love me? I love you, really. Do you love me? Improper use of words Improper diction usually makes the writing awkward. It is impossible to find in English two words that are completely identical; there would always be some subtle differences. Consult the dictionary(-ies) carefully to find the most appropriate word for the context. Read the explanations in English and sample sentences! I was holding the bad luck from the morning to the evening. I was experiencing/having/suffering from bad luck from morning to evening. I was experiencing/having/suffering from bad luck from dawn to dusk. The mountain was so high,and I did not have effort to climb over the mountain. So when I climbed in the middle of the mountain I ran out of effort,and I outed of breath. The mountain was so high, and I did not have the stigma/perseverance to climb over it. So when I climbed to the middle of the mountain I ran out of energy, and was breathless. Even I can not remind which day was worse than that day. remind: to make someone remember something Mrs Welland reminded her son that they still had several people to see. I had to remind myself that being confident is not the same as being perfect! recall: to remember a particular fact, event, or situation from the past I seem to recall Ive met him before somewhere. Even I can not recall which day was worse than that one. Problems with logic The meaning of a sentence should be consistent; there should be no misunderstanding or contradiction within the sentence. Please use proper words and phrases which can indicate the relationship between different sentences accurately. Do not write ambiguous sentences; a sentence should have only one meaning. I overslept in the