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英语写作训练答案 第一讲：Stylish English is concise 1. During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning. 2. At the second traffic light turn left. 3. Two partners will present their views over a long-distance call. 4. college students who lacks sufficient financial backing. 5. Our aim is to ensure proper health care for all Chinese. 6. This book will help you master the basics of good writing. 7. The search of the forest was complete. 或They conducted a complete search of the forest. 8. He has no principles, public or private. 9. She immediately obliged anyone who telephoned for help with homework. 10. The car negotiated the corner. 11. If the government agency finds that you received a payment that you werent entitled to, you must pay the entire sum back. 12. The great blessing of good health may be had through proper diet, exercise, and rest. 第二讲：避免过于依赖从句 避免过多使用but句 1. The children at school were familiar with games Li Hua had never even heard of. The silence of the room was broken by a sudden clap of thunder outside. 3. They were passionate lovers onstage and off. 4. Outside the cinema, she lit a cigarette, as much from the need for warmth as from any desire to smoke. 5. The film Chariots of Fire is much more than just a story of young runners. 2. 避免过多使用if...then和if从句 No person ever yet became great by imitation. The quickest way to end a war is to lose it. Were we directed from government bureaucracy when to sow, and when to reap, we should soon want bread. Several staff members have checked the manuscript for accuracy and ease of use. Words taken out of context do not always mean what they do in context. 3. 避免过多使用even though和although从句 1. Important as they were in California, laundries were even more significant in other parts of the United States, for laundering was one of the four pioneer occupations that enabled Chinese to move eastward across the continent. 2. The summer of 1889 was the warmest on record, followed by a cold winter. 4避免过多使用so...that...或suc