2014年北京市中考英语作文优秀范文与评分标准.docVIP

2014年北京市中考英语作文优秀范文及评分标准 评分标准：第一档：（15~13分） 完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。 第二档：（12~9分） 基本符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档：（8~5分） 部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。 第四档：（4~0分） 与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑词语，所写内容难以理解。 听力材料 一、文段表达。（共15分） 根据中文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的英文短文。 临近中考, 同学们学习时间长、压力大。有人害怕压力，有人认为有压力并不是一件坏事。某学校最近开展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你是否也有压力和你对压力的看法，并提供一些缓解压力的好办法, 与同学们分享。注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。短文的开头和结尾已给出(不计入总词数)。 Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls! Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Friends，although pressure is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. What we can do is to face it bravely and try to make “Less Pressure, Better Life”. That’s all. Thank you! 文段表达。（共15分） Some students are afraid of it, but some of them think we also need pressure. I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student. So they send me to all kinds of weekend classs. I really felt tired. So I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy and I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem. What’s more, in my opinion, listening to music and playing sports are good ways because they are really helpful to both my health and my study. 二、文段表达（20分） 51. 根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。所给的英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假如你是Mike，远在美国的妈妈想了解你在中国最好的朋友的情况。请你给妈妈写封邮件，介绍你在中国最好的朋友。请你根据妈妈的问题回复邮件。 提示词语：interest, know each other, help, kind, friendly 1. Who is your best friend?2. What does your best friend look like? 1. Who is your best friend? 2. What does your best friend look like? 3. Why is he/she your best f