第四讲 怎样跳出“大众分”——词汇要“美”,妙语要“多”.ppt

THANKS! 谢谢观看 写作技法指导 高考案例感悟 应用落实体验 首页 上一页 下一页 末页 专题五 书面表达 英语 结束 写作技法指导 高考案例感悟 应用落实体验 首页 上一页 下一页 末页 第四讲 怎样跳出“大众分”——词汇要“美”， 妙语要“多” 英语 结束 ② It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. (2014·江西书面表达) 评：上述的lovely和harmonious都比good更具体生动。 ② So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are sure to achieve success. → So long as we hold fast to our ideals and never give up, we are bound to achieve success. (2014·山东写作) ① In the coming three years, our school life will be difficult. → In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. (2014·江西书面表达) ②As the number of English learners is increasing, it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. → As the number of English learners is on the rise, it’s not difficult for them to understand these words in Chinese contexts. (2014·江苏书面表达) ① Developing a good habit is also important. → Developing a good habit is also of importance. (2014·江西书面表达) Ⅱ.请使用高级词汇提升下面考生作文 (2014·石家庄市二模)当前，越来越多的人开始使用用手机支付。请根据以下提示，以Mobile Payment为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍手机支付。 1．丰富了日常支付手段； 2．不受时间、地点限制； 3．需要具备手机和网络； 4．可能存在问题(如账户安全等)。 专题　 第四讲 一份高考作文在阅卷时往往在1分钟内就被判定为生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！ 一、使用高级词汇的4 大原则 1．具体性原则 在具备一定词汇量的条件下，具体的表达比泛泛而谈的内容更能引起读者的共鸣。例如：当描述一个具体事物或人时，类似a nice/good man的表达让人感觉很空洞，我们可以用有个性的、具体的词描绘一个人，如kind-hearted(好心的)；generous(慷慨的；大方的)；easy-going(随和的)等。 ① I will have my own family probably with a lovely child. (2014·新课标全国卷Ⅱ书面表达) 2．新颖性原则 写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。但是需注意：既要避免使用俗词，又要避开冷僻词汇。 3．短语优先原则 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。 ③ I was going to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. → I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. (2014·湖北短文写作) 4．避免重复原则 尽量