高中英语教学竞赛公开课、高考复习课件——高中英语读后续写专题--动作描写之动作链动作面专项课件.pptxVIP

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5W1H;篇章结构，情感变化Lead合理预测情节，确定续写内容Think动作描写，情感描写，环境描写Write续写步骤Revision

Watchavideoandanswersomequestions.1.Whereisthisvideotakenfrom?2.Whatdidthisprose(散文)wanttoconvey?3.HowdidZhuZiqingexpresshisfather’slove?ThesightofFather’sbackbyZhuZiqing.Father’slovetohisson.Hedidn’trevealthedeeplovewithdirectwords,insteadlettingactionsspeaklouder.

Showthereaderseverything,tellthemnothing.--ErnestHemingwayToshow,nottotellWhatis“toshow”?ToTell:giveusinformation.ToShow:helpusformpicturesinourmindthroughdetails.

1ActionchainS+V1,V2andV3Doing，S+V2andV3Havingdone,S+V

动作描写之具象化--将结果性动作细节到过程性动作。ActionchainPre-action（先前动作）Trans-action(过渡动作)Post-action(后续动作)Action具体的动作描写拦下车上车告知目的地Hestoppedthetaxi,jumpedwiththesuitcaseandtoldthedriver,“Gotothepolicestation,please.””高考范例：描述“上出租车去警察局”的动作。S+V1,V2andV3S+V1,V2andV3

actionchain场景：Thomas发表演讲Thomasglancedattheaudience,tookadeepbreathandbeganhisspeech.扫视观众深呼吸开始演讲发表演讲Pre-action（先前动作）Trans-action(过渡动作)Post-action(后续动作)V1V2V3ActionchainS+V1,V2andV3

actionchain1.他放下书包，掏出课本，开始朗读。2.小猫跳上桌子，叼起鱼干，跑回了窝。3.男孩握紧拳头，咬紧牙关，冲向了终点线。S+V1,V2andV3Heputdownhisschoolbag,pulledouthistextbook,andstartedreading.Thekittenjumpedontothetable,pickedupthedriedfish,andranbacktoitsnest.Theboyclenchedhisfists,grittedhisteeth,anddashedtowardthefinishline.Actionchain

actionchain刚睡醒=Rubbinghiseyessleepily,睡眼惺忪地揉眼睛+把腿移到床外+摸索着找拖鞋heswunghislegsoverthebedandgropedforhisslippers.场景：刚睡醒ActionchainDoing，S+V2andV3doingV2V3

actionchain李白站在月下=+思念家乡站在月下+看着月亮Standingunderthemoon,andmissedhisfamily.Libaigazedatthemoon场景：“举头望明月，低头思故乡”ActionchainDoing，S+V2andV3doingV2V3

actionchain场景：餐厅等位一小时还没等到位思