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高水平作文的要求： Criteria (IELTS Band 7 Descriptors) Task Achievement Addresses all parts of the task Presents a clear position throughout the response Presents, extends and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalize and/or supporting ideas may lack focus Coherence Cohesion Logically organizes information and ideas; there is a clear progression throughout Uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use Presents a clear central topic within each paragraph Lexical Resource Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision Uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation May produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling, and/or word formation Grammatical Range and Accuracy Uses a variety of complex structures Produces frequent error-free sentences Has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors 引言段 一句用改写的方式扣题，另一句承上启下。 正文段 写两句或者三句，给出两个或者三个理由。 结论段 一两句呼应主题，另一两句升华论述。 一、赞同与反对型 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. （不同意这个观点） This issue is a controversial one that affects the daily life of everyone. People usually take one side over the other, despite not having any idea about the subject. But in my case, I totally disagree with the title statement for my reasons below. With reference to living surroundings, the reason why I disagree with building a shopping center near my community is that it would be very noisy. Simply speaking, consumers or shoppers may disrupt the daily life of people in the local community. For example, if a shopping mall will be built, it would attract thousands of people and consequently, a lot of noisy and trash as well. Although the majority may stick to the idea that this new supermarket will be good for whole people in and out of the community, I still think its drawbacks outweigh the be