演示文稿英语书面表达.ppt

Lujiang middle school Zhang linsheng 2012 03 06 Some tips on English Writing 写作基本步骤 高级句式提升 典型失分错误分析 正反观点类范文评析 学习建议 假设你将参加某英语杂志社开展的一次征文活动，征文的内容要求你在电视、手机（cell）和网络三者中，放弃其中一个并陈述理由。请你以Which would you give up: TV, cell, or Web? 为题，写一篇英语短文。 (安徽卷 2010) With the development of modern technology, TV, cells and the web have become a necessary part of our daily life and it seems that we can’t live without them nowadays. Among the three, I like the web most. Why ? First, there are many interesting things on the Internet; you know, we can use it to watch movies, listen to music and play computer games. Second, We students are faced with great burden on study, and we need to relax ourselves. What I like most is chatting with my friends on weekends. What about you? Third, the Internet can help us on study. If you have any questions, you can use Baidu or Google to find the answers you need. How amazing it is! So, in my opinion, the web is the most important. What do you think of my opinion? I am looking forward to hearing from your early reply! 审题 （要点全，确定文体，人称，时态等） 二. 草稿 三. 卷面成文（连接词，过渡句？） 四.检查（时态语态，大小写，冠词等） I am very much like English. My favorite subject including English and history. In their opinion, go to university is the only way to success. Oliver Twist, the hero of the story, he was an orphan. The most students think so. To realize our dream, we have to work more and more harder. Do you fond of playing football? There have 30% students support the plan of not taking cells to school. Why don’t you ask somebody else help you? j. My hometown has taken place great changes in the past few years. k.