如何将情景文从五档提升至四档.pptVIP

如何将情景文从五档提升到四档? 本班（26人）在2012年西城一模中情景文的得分情况 考试说明对情景作文四档文和五档文的描述 2012年西城一模情景作文 For two years my family has been supporting Xiao Ming, a boy from a poor family. Sun day the morning, I and my father drived car went to Xiao Ming’s home. A letter time, we was arrived at his family. Xiao Ming was busying worked. My father and I given XiaoMing a bag and some books, he very excited and enjoyed his prize with us. Xiao Ming studyed was very hard. We were very happy. After dinner, my father and I left his family. We goodbye each other. This is an unforgettable experience for me. Write down the correct sentences 1. I and my father drived car went to Xiao Ming’s home. 2. We goodbye each other. 1.在贫困地区有很多孩子需要我们的帮助。 将情景文从五档提升到四档的关键 * * * * * 第五档(1-5): 未完成试题规定的任务。 明显遗漏要点内容； 句式单调、词汇贫乏； 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。 第四档(6-11):未恰当完成试题规定的任务； 漏掉或未描述清楚主要内容； 所用句式和词汇有限； 语法或用词方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解，未能清楚的传达信息。 假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华，上周你和爸爸去看望了你们资助了两年的贫困学生小明。下面四幅图描述了事情的全过程，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。 注意：1．文章的开头已为你写好。 2．词数不少于60。 Mark the passage! 5’ Correct the passage! Sun day the morning, I and my father drived car went to Xiao Ming’s home. A letter time ,we was arrived at his family. Xiao Ming was busying worked. My father and I given Xiao Ming a bag and some books, he very excited and enjoyed his prize with us. Xiao Ming studyed was very hard. We were very happy. After dinner, my father and I left his family. We goodbye each other. This is an unforgettable experience for me. drove Last Sunday little △ later busy working gave △ was showed to studied △ said/waved △ to 一套主谓在心间，明确结构不会乱； My father and I drove car to Xiao Ming’s home. My father and I went to Xiao Ming’s home by car. We said/waved goodbye to each other. Group 2 We arrived at his home. 1. We was arrived at his family. 2. Xiao Ming is live in the village. Xiao Ming lives in the village. 3. Xiao Ming was busying worked. Xiao Ming was busy wo