学会扩充句子-写出高分作文.pptVIP

学会扩充句子，写出高分作文 大学生活即将开始，你将面对新的学习和生活环境，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈你打算如何安排你的大学生活。内容要点应包括： 1．确定新的学习目标 2．改进学习方法 3．学会独立生活 4．参加各种课外活动 5．处理好与同学的关系 注意：①短文内容要连贯、完整； ②短文词数：100左右(开头已给出的单词不计入单词总数)。 I will go to college in the near future. __________________________________________. 步骤一：列要点 1．________ a new target for learning 2．________ my study method 3．________ how to live on my own／learn to depend on myself 4．_______________different kinds of after-class activities. 5．______________my classmates. 步骤二：造简单句 1．_______________set a new target for my study. 2．___________improve my learning skills. 3．______________learn how to live on my own. 4．_____________take part in different kinds of after-class activities. 5．______________I can get on well with my classmates. 步骤三：扩展句子 1．1 would like to set a new target for my study ______________________ ．(添加状语从句) 2．1 want to improve my learning skills and work even harder _____________．(补充细节) 3．I am wining to learn how to live on my own as life at college is quite different from that in middle school/ _____________________ __________________________. (添加状语从句或通过举例来补充细节) 4．I plan to take part in different kinds of after-class activities _________________ _________________________________ ________．(添加目的状语) 5．I hope that I can get on well with my classmates _______________________ ______________．(添加分词作方式状语) 步骤四：润色句子 句子的润色包括词语选择与句型运用。仔细观察每一个句子是否可以运用自己熟知的较高级词汇和句型。首先，在词汇选择上，高分作文往往都会用“较高级词汇”来代替常见词语。例如：要点2 I want to improve my learning method and work even harder ( more efficiently) at my lessons这里的“more efficiently”就属于“较高级词汇”。 要点4 I plan to take part in different kinds of after-class activities in order to get more experience and learn more about the world. 如将本句斜体部分替换为broaden my horizons，就显得比较生动。在造句时，“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。 其次，在句型运用上，优秀作文常选择“较高级结构”来表达同一思想内容。 例如，要点1、3采用状语从句，要点3还可利用it句型：It’s necessary for me to learn how to live on my own as life at college is quite different from that