【原创】考研作文范文梳理总结(一).docVIP

（一）范文：? Have you ever noticed the “great changes” of your hometown? If you have, you may sense the same regret and sorrow as the retired man does in the pictures. A newly-built bridge over the river attracts the attention of him and spurs his excitement. However, leaning against the bridge, he finds no water flowing in the river. ??????The author of the cartoon, through the sight of the aged man, is imparting us the notion that never sacrifice ecological balance for economic benefits. Admittedly, economic development labels the advancement of society! However, never place too much emphasis on it, or we may go to an extreme! Any cases? Sure! Haven’t you ever noticed that chimneys brought big bucks to enterprises but big troubles to the general public, foggy air for one? Haven’t you ever found that urbanization offers people more houses but less comfort? Why are we so zealous of “destroying our surroundings”? Aren’t we doing so to exhibit our “achievements” of civil construction???????At the end of the day, we have to find a way out! Only with the combination of transforming of economic planning, guiding from experts, and supervising from the general public, can the situation turn optimistic! Currently, department concerned, aided by experts, are working forcefully to boost the green-economy. However, if there were also effective supervision from the general public, which requires assistance from the mass media, economic construction would go green and reasonable. （二）范文解读： Have you ever noticed the “great changes” of your hometown? If you have, you may sense（闪光词汇，可以用来替换find） the same regret and sorrow （这种列举能力是我们大多数考生很欠缺的，这需要我们平时细致的收集、积累。）as the retired man does in the pictures. A newly-built bridge （很闪光却很简单的语法结构A newly—built+名词）over the river attracts（也可以换成draws） the attention of him and spurs（词典中背了那么久，现在知道它的其中一种表达了吧：spur one’s excitement） his excitement. However, leaning against the bridge(两个句子主语相同，省去主语，用现在分词做状语), he finds no water flowing in the river. ??????The au