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* Step 1: 审题 Q1: 文章用什么时态？ 一般现在时态 Q2: 文章打算分为几个段落？ 3 Q3: 文章用第几人称？ 第一人称we or I Step 2： 列关键句型 1. We should/ shouldn’t……我们应该。。。 2. We have to/must …….我们必须。。。 3. We’d better ……我们最好。。。 4. Try to/ not to …….尝试去/不去。。。 5. it‘s adj. for sb to do sth对于某人而言做某事怎么样 6. Do not … , otherwise you will…不要怎样，否则你会怎样 Step3：写正文部分 学生典型作文1： In P.E class, we should wear sports shoes and do warming up exercises. In the dining room, we shouldn’t run, we should wait in line. In the science lab, we should keep our hands away from our face. We shouldn’t work alone. We should We shouldn’t We should We shouldn’t 5 8 加？ 丰富句式？ In P.E class, we should wear sports shoes and do warming up exercises. In the dining room, we mustn’t run, we’d better wait in line. In the science lab, try not to work alone, because some experiments are dangerous. It’s very necessary to keep your hands away from your face, eyes and mouth. Hello，everyone！It’s very important for us to keep safe in school. Here are some pieces of my advice: First, in P.E class, we should wear sports shoes and do warming up exercises. Then, in the dining room, we mustn’t run, we’d better wait in line. Besides, try not to work alone in the science lab, because some experiments are dangerous. What‘s more, it’s very necessary to keep your hands away from your face, eyes and mouth. In a word, I hope we can keep safe in school. Don’t hesitate, start form ourselves right now. 12 Step 4：美化作文 Q1; 加谚语？可以吗？你能想到哪些相关的谚语？ Safety comes first 安全第一 加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。 加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。 锻炼对学生有好处 It is good for us students to take exercise… As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise. 集中注意力于学习 We should concentrate on our studies. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies... 加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。 加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，