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作文评分举例： A. GOOD HEALTH B. Time limit: 40minutes C. word limit: more than 150 words (not including the given opening sentence) D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: “The desire for good health is universal.” E. Your composition should be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. Outline: Importance of good health. Ways to keep fit. My own practices. 首先要定下一个主题或一个中心意思，并用一句话表达出来（即主题句）；其次，选择有助于阐述这一中心意思的例子或细节，把他们一一列出；最后，把这些细节按逻辑顺序排好，一个段落的初稿就这样设计出来了。 Sample 1 （18分） Wherever you are and whatever you do, staying healthy is always important. With the improvement of our living standards, people are attaching more and more importance to their health. Ordinary people can’t keep the high working efficiency without good health. The same thing is true with students, scientists and doctors. In my opinion, good diet and exercises are two major ways to keep healthy. The food we eat every day must be rational and should include meat, vegetables, eggs, and fruit. It is important to drink water every day and not to get addicted to drinking coffee or some other soft drink. Exercising every day is also essential for us to stay healthy. We can ride bicycles, play tennis or swim. Of course we don’t need to exhaust ourselves. We should plan our physical exercises according to our actual condition. An hour a day is enough. As a university student, I have much free time to do exercises. I usually play badminton and tennis. But sometimes I am lazy and do not exercise for all kinds of excuses, such as cold weather and exams. I must correct it. I am also careful with my diet. In a way, keeping healthy is not very hard, if you just take it seriously. (210 words.) Sample 2 (17分) In our competitive society it is important to maintain good health. On the one hand, people with good health can do work with full confidence and their progress in work in turn contributes to their health and happiness. On the other hand, a s