英语写作指导课件.pptVIP

Writing Read the Requirements (题目要求) topic 主题 tense 时态 person 人称 Wh- when, where, who, what, why, how 假如你是张华，昨天是你15岁生日。请根据下面的图片用英语写一篇短文，记录你是如何庆祝生日的，并表达你的感想。 要求：1.词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.必须包含图片所提供的信息，语句通顺连贯。 topic tense person Birthday celebration Buying flowers Requirements simple past tense simple present tense the third person she the first person I the second person you 假如你是张华，昨天是你15岁生日。请根据下面的图片用英语写一篇短文，记录你是如何庆祝生日的，并表达你的感想。 要求：1.词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.必须包含图片所提供的信息，语句通顺连贯。 Before writing List the key points.(列出要点) phrases sentences paragraphs passage spend/ celebrate receive gifts something special buy some flowers Key words phrases Last year I spent the day with my friends. I received a lot of gifts. This year, I wanted to do something special. I went to a flower shop and bought some flowers. t decided So for a patient in hospital. Simple Sentences Conjunctions 连接词 While writing I used to spend the day with my friends. and However, 顺序： 并列承接： 转折： 因果： first of all, then, next, finally, above all and, as well as, not only…but also… however, but, although, while, besides because, so that, as a result Conjunctions 连接词 Paragraphs Complex sentences 复合句 After lunch, I went to the hospital with the flowers. When I met a nurse in the hospital, I asked her if there was a patient who needed flowers. At first she was surprised, but after hearing my words, she happily introduced an old lady to me. When I gave the flowers to the old lady, she was so moved that she said thanks to me again and again. I went to the hospital with the flowers. In the hospital, I asked a nurse, ” Is there a patient who needs flowers? ” At first she was surprised, but after hearing my words, she happily introduced an old lady to me. I gave the flowers to the old lady. The old lady was very moved. She said thanks to me again and again. After lunch, I went to the hospital with the flowers. When I met a