2016届中考英语写作公开课教学课件以how to care for the elders为例共19张ppt.pptVIP

海桂学校 邓蕾 Writing task 话题：中国人口的老龄化趋势让人们更加关注老年人的晚年生活。请根据提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文。开头已给出： How to care for the elders Young people always complain that they face lot of pressures with caring for the elders. How the aging people can be cared well is a a hot topic in recent years. In my opinion, we , our government and our society can do just as follows... Writing task Problems of the elders What problems do the elders have? brainstorming 1 problems of the elders lonely don’t have enough money can’t go to other places no friends weak in health Think of what the elders need 2 what the elders need Spending more time with them enough money enough space to do exercise medicine people’ respect who how why we government the whole society What can we do? sons and daughters spend more time What can the society do ? provide some space for them to exercise educate children to care for old people take effective measures to help them lectures on health can be given to them introduction body conclusion simple future tense Connecting words Illustration (阐述） Addition （递进） Contrast （转折） Summary （总结） I think…I believe… I suggest…In my opinion Secondly…And then…Besides… In addition… But…However… On the other hand… In short…In a word… Therefore…So… Writing task Begin to write： How to care for the elders Young people always complain that they face lot of pressures with caring for the elders. How the aging people can be cared well is a hot topic in recent years. In my opinion, we , our government and our society can do just as follows... Check your own writing: Are all the key point included? Are your ideas organized logically? Is the tense used correctly? Are spellings corect? Swap your letter with your partner. help to improve it. Pick out any mistakes you see in spelling, verb forms, or punctuation. Swap back. Correct any mistakes and write it out. 2 1 Firstly, our government should adopt more effective measures to make the elders have enough money f