雅思作文写作Task 2 第八课时—范文赏析.docVIP

IELTS作文讲解： 范文赏析 学生 面授老师 时间 本次课时 IELTS写作第八课时 教学思路 1.理论实际应用 2.范文赏析与学习 教学目标 1. 明确分析题目的类型 2．快速组织写作思路 3. 提高写作质量 讲解重点 范文思路讲解 语言分析 备考资料 剑桥真题、《雅思写作套路剖析与范例大全》 教学详细内容： 一、雅思小作文真题范文赏析 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 　　* The chart and graph below give information about sales and share prices for Coca-Cola. 　　* Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 　　You should write at least 150 words. 审题: 1. 本题出现两个图，饼图与曲线图，首先确定写作结构，饼图和曲线图分别叙述，若两者之间有联系，则需要指出。这样本篇作文的大体结构就可以设置三部分，第一段对总体进行概述，主体段对两个表格分别描述，末段进行总结（可选） 2. 写作要点分析： 饼图信息点：确定时间2000年，内容可口可乐罐装销售总额，地点为五个地区，分别占的百分比，最大与最小百分比分别对应的地区。 曲线图： 确定时间96年-01年，内容为可口可乐的股价，以美元为单位计算，曲线信息可分为两个时间段，98年中期之前与之后的特点对比，总体趋势波动 范文： 　　The pie chart shows the worldwide distribution of sales of Coca-Cola in the year 2000 and the graph shows the change in share prices between 1996 and 2001. 首段介绍两个图表的主要信息，巧妙地进行关键词的改写 the worldwide distribution 　　In the year 2000, Coca-Cola sold a total of 17.1 billion cases of their fizzy drink product worldwide. The largest consumer was North America, where 30.4 per cent of the total volume was purchased. The second largest consumer was Latin America. Europe and Asia purchased 20.5 and 16.4 per cent of the total volume respectively, while Africa and the Middle East remained fairly small consumers at 7 per cent of the total volume of sales. 以整体总量开头，首句描述图表的整体信息，继而采用从大到小的顺序进行描述 largest， the second largest， faily small条理展开清晰 中间不具代表性的信息点进行归纳一笔带过，如亚洲欧洲 　　Since 1996, share prices for Coca-Cola have fluctuated. In that year, shares were valued at approximately $35. Between 1996 and 1997, however, prices rose significantly to $70 per share. They dipped a little in mid-1997 and then peaked at $80 per share in mid-98. From then until 2000 their value fell consistently but there was a slight rise in mid-2000. 首句对曲线图的总体形势进行概述 采用时间先后顺序进行展开，主线非常明确 对各个阶段的形势描述举行多样，词汇运用非常丰富和准确 二、 雅思大作文范文赏析 例1： Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time on s