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智课网IELTS备考资料雅思OG写作Test6 Task1解析 摘要： 雅思OG写作提供详尽的写作思路，让考生明确如何合理的构建框架。并且对范文进行完整的分解，点出范文亮点，供考生学习模仿。一起看看小编带来的雅思OG写作Test6 Task1解析。 小马 过河为考生做了 雅思 OG写作Test6 Task1的解析： 雅思OG写作审题要领(Task focus) 这篇小作文是一张线形图(line chart),显示了 2003-2012 年,发生在纽波特中心城区三种犯罪事件发生 率的变化。考生需要提取并总结主要信息,同时做出相关对比。从图表信息我们可以看到,纵轴显示了事 件的数量(number of incidents),横轴表示从 2003-2012 的时间发展。三个犯罪事件分别是入室盗窃 (burglary)、车辆盗窃(car theft)和人身抢劫(robbery)。 雅思OG写作写作思路(Thinking before writing) 考生需要在 150 字之内对图表里的信息进行概括,有侧重的描写主要特征,必要时选择适当省略。我们要 特别注意这张线形图中突出的以及变化的信息。比较突出的信息是:在 2003 年,入室盗窃的犯罪率最高, 其次是车辆盗窃,人身抢劫的比率最低。但是到了 2012 年,车辆盗窃成了发生率最高的犯罪事件,人身 抢劫的发生率仍然最低。变化最明显的信息是:从 2003 到 2012 年,变化最大的是入室盗窃率,总体呈 大幅下降的趋势。变化最小的是人身抢劫,其犯罪率一直处在比较低的范围。根据所获得的信息,推荐的 写法是将主体段分为三段,分别描写三种犯罪形式的变化情况,这是比较理想的行文方式,结构清晰,且 便于进行内容之间的比较。 雅思OG写作范文演示(Sample analysis) Model Response This graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Newport inner city during the period 2003-2012. We can see immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidents of theft remained low but steady. In 2003, we can see that burglary was the most common crime, with approximately 3,400 reported cases. The figure rose to around 3,700 in 2004, but then there was a downward trend until 2008. At this point the figure stood at just over 1,000 incidents. This rose slightly in 2009, then continued to fluctuate for the remaining period. In 2003, the number of cars being stolen stood at around 2,800 and followed a similar trend to burglary until 2006. At this point the number rose, standing at around 2,200 in 2007. There was a marginal decrease in the following year, but from then on, the trend was generally upwards. Finally, robbery has always been a fairly minor problem for Newport. The number of offences committed changed little over nine years. It is interesting to note that the figure of approximately 700 in 2003 is the same figure for 2012. (187 words) 雅思OG写作范文亮点(Sample highlights) 第 1 段:改写原题 第一段通常为题目的改写或提炼。原题目中的“shows the