英语写作 句子提升.ppt

III. Use transitions (使用过渡连接) 2. Sentences:（加上常见句型开头） I’m familiar with Beijing. → Another reason ______ _____ the fact that I’m familiar with Beijing. → The most __________ thing is that I’m familiar with Beijing. → There is no ________ that I’m familiar with Beijing because I was born in Beijing. → It’s _________to say that I’m familiar with Beijing because I was born in Beijing. lies in important doubt needless Ⅳ. Use different sentences (使用多样句型） 1. I’m familiar with Beijing. It’s important for the work. I’m familiar with Beijing, ____________________ _______________________________. (定语从句) 2. I’m a boy and I’m 18. I was born in Beijing. I’m a middle school student. _________________________________________ ____________________________________. (定语从句/分词作状语) which is of great importance for the work Born in Beijing, I’m an 18-year-old boy, who is studying in a middle school Ⅳ. Use different sentences (使用多样句型） 3. I won’t disappoint you. 　　　　　　　　　　　　（句首否定词倒装） 4. If you give me the chance, I’ll offer the best service to others. If ________ the chance, I’ll offer the best service to others. ( 使用省略） On no account (决不) _____________________. will I disappoint you given ６. I’ll offer the best service to others. → It is _____________ that _________________. (使用强调句） 5. I like sports very much. 　　I ________ like sports very much. (使用强调） do Ⅳ. Use different sentences (使用多样句型） the best service I’ll offer to others * How to Improve Our Expression in Writing ? 高三英语作文提升指导 1.所选题材及体裁都非常贴近考生生活， 实际具有时代特点，紧扣与学生相关的 社会热点及学生的生活与学习。 2.词数要求从120提高到150，既要求表 达事实信息，又要陈述个人观点，对考 生思维和表达能力的要求提高了。 3.开头或/和结尾都已经给出，无文体要 求，主要考查考生的表达能力。 1. 词数都符合试题要求。 2. 都覆盖了所有要点，并进行了分段表达，基本上是3段； 3.所用句型以简单句为主，但是使用了一定量的高级词汇，大量的短语和句型，丰富的句式结构增强了表达的效果。 4.都有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 高考评分标准 第五档（21-25） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，完全