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2008年奥运会落幕，一家英文报刊在其网站上征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议．假设你叫李华，是该报的一名读者，请给该报编辑部写一封信，谈谈你的建议和理由．内容包括． １．向公众开放，用于健身 ２．租给体育公司，创造经济效益 ３．开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客． ４．……… Dear editor, I am Li Hua, a reader of your paper. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ①08年奥运会刚刚落幕. ②征集奥运会后如何综合利用体育场馆的建议. ③你想写一些建议 ①向公众开放，用于健身. ②租给体育公司，创造经济效益. ③开辟成旅游景点，吸引游客 一.使用较高级词汇使文章增加吸引力 1. Many people want to visit the stadium . 2. The stadium is useful. 1.The 29th Olympic Games were successfully ended. It left many stadiums unused  1.we can let stadium make sense Only when we make full use of the stadium 2. The stadiums can be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits. they can be the places to appeal visitors to pay a visit. We should take the Olympic stadiums into consideration after Beijing hosted the games successfully. The 29th Olympic Games were ended successfully. we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily lives You can open them for the public. The stadiums can be used to take exercise. 你班同学参加了一场讨论。讨论的主题是：城市内是否可以养宠物（狗和猫）。请你根据下表所提供的信息，写一篇作文并说明自己的观点和建议。 Only when we make full use of the stadium can we let stadium make sense Not only can the stadiums be rented to the physical company to create more economic profits, but also they can be the places to appeal visitors to pay a visit. 三. 巧用倒装增强句子表现力 It is the Olympic stadiums that we should take into consideration after Beijing hosted the games successfully. With the 29th Olympic Games ended successfully, we start talking about how to use the stadiums properly for our daily lives. 四. 尝试多样化表达方式 ①强调句 ②With短语复合结构 You can open the stadiums which can be used to take exercise for the public. 四. 尝试多样化表达方式 ③定语从句 ④各种状语从句 我们锻炼的越多，我们就越健康。 The more exercises we take, the healthier we will become. ⑤被动语态 We should pay more attention to the stadiums. More attention should be paid to the stadiums. I heard you are collecting some advice