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专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 极智批改网 Smartpigai 批改范文 写作原题2 考生原文3 批改过程6 总评分数8 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 本范文为粗批版，登陆极智批改网，享受最专业的外教批改服务 专属外教团队依据考试官方指南提供专业作文批改和口语批改服务 破解官方指南，还原打分标准。专业批改·极速提分·极智批改网 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 写作原题 The following appeared in a memorandum from the owner of Movies Galore， a chain of movie-rental stores. Becauseofdecliningprofits， wemustreduceoperatingexpensesatMovies Galores ten movie-rental stores. Raising prices is not a good option， since we arefamous forourlowprices.Instead， weshould reduceouroperatinghours.Last monthourstoreindowntownMarstonreduceditshoursbyclosingat6：00p.m.rather than 9：00 p.m. and reduced its overall inventory by no longer stocking any DVD released more than five years ago. Since we have received very few customer complaints about these new policies， we should now adopt them at all other Movies Galore stores as our best strategies for improving profits. Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument. 本范文为粗批版，登陆极智批改网，享受最专业的外教批改服务 专属外教团队依据考试官方指南提供专业作文批改和口语批改服务 破解官方指南，还原打分标准。专业批改·极速提分·极智批改网 专业批改·极速提分·就上极智批改网（SMARTPIGAI） 考生原文 In the memorandum, the owner of Movies Galore asserts that by reducing the business hours of movie-rental store and releasing old movies, the profits of the store will increase. The assertion seems strengthened by the fact that their store in downtown M who practices the reform has decreased its operating expense, but the connec