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怎 样 让 书 面 表 达 文 采 飞 扬;05高考英语书面表达评分原则4：;1. 多实少虚 :;学生过街在车辆中穿行危险。;较高级词汇(Exercises2);较高级词汇(Exercises 3);;丰富的语法结构(Exercises 1);4.(由于不知道他的电话，他没法跟Mary联系)(用非谓语） 5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 6. Tom and Mary like singing songs.( 使用倒装）;7. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.（使用句型结构） 9. Because the weather is fine, many people went to climb the Western hill. （使用独立主格结构） ; 一篇好的书面表达，还应该行文连贯流畅，具有“逻辑美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑，使文章更为地道，更具“英语味”。记得使用恰当的连接词，如:;1. This village is very small. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 .; Last Sunday, two Young Pioneers were on their way to the Children’s Palace . They saw a box fall off a passing truck. They shouted “stop” to the driver at the top of their voice. ;3. Yesterday， there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy. ;2. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. ;飞;联考书面表达欣赏：;联考书面表达欣赏：;Homework:; 联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况： ? 1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。 2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。 3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。 注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。 　　　　2）词数：100-120之间。;Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! ; In the past, the school here was very small ⑤. ⑥ Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦ The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys ⑧. It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. ⑨ They enjoy free education in it. ⑩ Thank you.;Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! ① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However, it has ch