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从简单句突破到雅思作文 例句： 大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪工作是不可能的。 句型:It is impossible for sb to do sth. It is impossible for 刚刚毕业的大学生 to 找到高薪工作. 1.刚刚毕业的大学生 定语从句 College students who have graduated. 2.高薪的jobs to find jobs which can give them a lot of money. So ,it turns to be like that: It is impossible for college students who have just graduated to find jobs which can give them a lot of money. 容易犯错，肿么办？ 1.刚刚毕业的大学生： newly-graduated college students 2.高薪的工作： well-paying jobs So, let’s put them together It is impossible for newly-graduated students to find well-paying jobs. 能不能再简单一点呢？ 把一句拆成四句: 1.每年，都有很多大学生毕业。 2.他们都想找到工作。 3.这些工作可以给他们很多钱。 4.这是不可能的。 So, it will be like this: 1.Every year, many college students graduate. (S+V) 2.They all want to find jobs. (S+V+O) 3.These jobs can give them a lot of money. (S+V+O+O) 4.This is impossible. (S+V+C) 能不能润色一下呢？ 一.Many 改成heaps and heaps of(一批一批的) graduate 加上修饰状语from universities. 再想到独立的学院and institutes. Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes. 二. 1句+2句 They all want to find jobs, which can give them a lot of money. 润色一下： give offer a lot of money handsome salaries 定语从句中加个插入语:they hope They all want to find jobs, which they hope can offer them handsome salaries. 三、 并列句，but连接 So They all want to find jobs, which can offer them handsome salaries, but is hardly possible. 最终结果： Every year, heaps and heaps of college students graduate from universities and institutes. They all want to find jobs, which they hope can offer them handsome salaries, but this is hardly possible. * *