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六 例文评论 在这个部分中，我们将结合例文的分析，让您充分体验实战提高的感觉。 我们ETS给出的例文。两个题目，每个题目都有从6分到1分的例文，大家可以阅读并仔细比较，体会一下TWE的评分标准。 Sample Topic A Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Teachers should make learning enjoyable and fun for their students. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Essay rating of 6 I do strongly support the idea that teachers should make learning enjoyable and fun for the students. This I support with the following reasons. First let us take the psychological component of a student. A child or student will be more receptive, to anything including studies, if the subject matter is presented in an interesting and enjoyable manner. If not there is every likelihood that the student will be unwilling or will reject the matter presented as he considers studying is a burden on him. My second point is that the present day student faces tremendous amount of distraction such as interesting television programmes, drugs, distractions from opposite sexes and many more. To get the student away from all these and to get him interested in studies there is obviously no other way than to make learning interesting. The present day students are also pressured with tremendous amount of competition from other students. With this mounting pressure on them coupled with the hugh expectation of the parents, it will lighten the burden on the young students with a more acceptable form of presentation that is in an enjoyable and fun manner. Retention is another factor that should considered important. Any presentation which is given an interesting or enjoyable manner can be retained well by the students. If the subject matter presented is uninteresting then there is strong likelihood the student will forget the subject matter presented in days or even hours. When presenting a subject the teacher should create a desire amongst the student to crave for knowledge on the subject and this can certainly be obtained if the subject matter is presented in a fun and enjoya