英语四级作文技巧.pptVIP

CET Band 4 作文 评分标准 满分15分； 阅卷标准共分五个等级：14分，11分，8分，5分及2分； 14分标准：文章切题；表达意思清楚；文字通顺，连贯性好；基本上无语言错误，仅有个别拼写小错。 11分标准：文章意思清楚；文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 评分标准 8分标准：基本切题；有些地方表达思想不够清楚；文字勉强连贯；语言错误多，其中有一些是严重错误。 5分标准：基本切题；表达思想不够清楚；连贯性差；有较多的严重语言错误。 2分标准：条理不清；思路紊乱；语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 评分标准 白卷：作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。 只写一段者：0-4分；只写两段者：0-9分 （指规定三段的作文）。 实际写作字数不足要扣分，一般每少10字扣1分。 各分段作文举例 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the title My Ideal Job. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1．人们对职业有不同的理想2．我理想的职业是什么3．我怎样为我理想的职业做准备 14分作文 When being asked about what we want to be in the future, different people have different answers. Some people want to be lawyers, other people want to be doctors, and still others want to be scientists. My ideal job is to be an excellent teacher. This ideal came into being when I was very young. If I am a teacher, not only can I teach all that I know to my students, but also can I learn from them, for young people are always active and creative. Therefore, life will be amazing and interesting and meaningful. 14分作文 However, I know it isn’t easy to be a good teacher. Being a teacher needs knowledge, patience, and skills. In the first place, I must work hard in order to be able to answer most of my students’ questions. And then I must learn to be patient and tolerant. Finally I shall have good skills so as to make myself understood quickly and clearly. So, you see, being a teacher requires many talents. But I am sure I will live up to the name of a teacher. 考官点评 内容切题，紧紧围绕文章的中心问题——个人理想及所做准备——进行分析和讨论，论述较充分；文章的结构很清晰，文字通顺；语言流畅。 通过In the first place，And then，Finally等连接词使文章层次分明，条理清晰，句式变化多样，结构紧凑有力。 运用excellent，active and creative，live up to等词使文章形象生动，用词准确、丰富。 英语基本功好，表达能力强。 11分作文 Each person has his or her own ideal job. For instance, man might want to be sailors, sportsmen, scientists, businessmen, etc. Meanwhile, many young girls would like to be nurse,