变换句式增强英语书面表达的可读性.docVIP

变换句式增强英语书面表达的可读性 在书面表达的评分原则中，除了要看要点是否全面，上下文是否连贯和语言的得体性之外，很重要的一条就是要看文章是否使用较复杂的结构和语句间的连接成分。为了使我们写的文章结构紧凑，语篇连贯，具有较强的可读性，这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中，多积累一些有用的习惯表达和典型句子，从而使自己的文章锦上添花。下面结合例句，浅谈一下如何在书面表达中变换句式，增强文章的可读性。 使用定语从句 1.（一般） Liu Shan is a woman doctor and was born on Sep1,1981. （优） Liu Shan ,who is a woman doctor, was born on Sep1,1981. 2. （一般） Li Meng is a professor and comes from the Computer Department of Shanxi University . He’ll give a lecture on how to use the Internet to study . （优）Li Meng ,who is a professor from the Computer Department of Shanxi University ,will give a lecture on how to use the Internet to study . 使用强调句型 1. (一般）The driver’s carelessness led to the accident . （优）It was the driver’s carelessness that led to the accident . 2.（一般）I hope all the people should realize the terrible result of not caring about our environment . （优）I do hope all the people should realize the terrible result of not caring about our environment . 使用非谓语动词 1.（一般）There are many students on the playground and they are playing football . （优）There are many students on the playground playing football . 2.（一般）We were led by a boy and we managed to get to the village . （优）Led by a boy , we managed to get to the village . 3.（一般）Mary pointed to the notice and said angrily, “Can’t you read?” （优）Pointing to the notice ,Mary said angrily, “Can’t you read?” 4. I saw an old lady waiting for a bus with an umbrella and a bag in her hand . 使用感叹句 1. Xiao Li fell down the stairs and got badly hurt. He had to stay in hospital .How unlucky he was ! / What a bad luck ! 2. It’s three months since I last saw you .How I miss you ! How nice to hear from you again ! With the stick, Tom drove the cat to the other end of the pipe and the cat pushed the ball out. How clever little Tom was ! 五. 使用倒装句 （一般）The art center was behind the library and some students were playing musical instruments there . （优）Behind the library was the art center ,where some students were playing musical instruments. 2. Such was my mo