2025年冀教版六年级英语写作写作技巧实战演练.docxVIP

2025年冀教版六年级英语写作写作技巧实战演练

考试时间：______分钟总分：______分姓名：______

第一部分：写作技巧指导

1.Whenwritingaparagraphaboutyourhobby,youusuallyneedtoincludethesepoints:whatyourhobbyis,howyoustartedit,andhowoftenyoudoit.Thesepointshelpmakeyourparagraphclearandcomplete.

2.Toaddmoredetailstoyourdescription,youcanuseadjectives(e.g.,beautiful,interesting)andadverbs(e.g.,happily,quickly).Also,trytousesomesimplesentencesandcompoundsentences.

3.Usingconnectingwords(e.g.,and,but,so,because,then,finally)canmakeyourwritingflowbetter.Theyhelpconnectideasandshowtheorderofevents.

4.Itsveryimportanttocheckyourwritingcarefullywhenyoufinish.Lookforspellingmistakes,grammarerrors(likeverbtenses),andpunctuationmarks(likecommas,periods).

第二部分：写作实践

directions:Lookatthefourpicturesbelow.Theyaredescribingahappyday.Pleasereadthesentencescarefullyandwriteashortpassage(about60-80words)describingwhathappenedonthishappyday.Youcanusethewordsintheboxifyouwant,butyoudonthaveto.

Wordsinthebox:

*fun*because*hobby*finally*sister*play*visit

(Picture1:Twochildrenareplayingagamehappilyinthepark.)*

(Picture2:Adogisrunningaroundthem.)*

(Picture3:Aboyisgettingaballoonfromastreetvendor.)*

(Picture4:Thechildrenarelaughingwhileholdingtheballoons.)*

Writeyourpassagehere:

试卷答案

第一部分：写作技巧指导

1.开头点明写作段落主题（爱好），中间阐述爱好的来源和频率，结尾总结或强调，使段落清晰完整。

2.使用形容词和副词丰富描述，运用简单句和并列句（或并列连词连接的句子）增加句式变化。

3.运用过渡词连接不同观点或时间顺序，使文章逻辑清晰，衔接自然。

4.写完后检查拼写、语法（时态、动词形式等）和标点符号的正确性。

第二部分：写作实践

MysisterandIhadaveryhappydaylastSunday.Wewokeupearlyanddecidedtogototheparkbecauseitwasaniceday.MysisterandIloveplayinggames,sowestartedplayingcatchinthepark.Therewasafundogrunningaroundus,whichmadethegamemoreexciting.Later,Iboughtabeautifulballoonfromastreetvendor.Mysisteralsogotone