2025年中考英语作文考前冲刺课件.pptxVIP

作文一;Proverbs;表达观点：

①Inmyopinion,nothingisbetterthan..

②Frommypointofview,Ipreferdoing...to....

③AsfarasIamconcerned,Iconsider...asagoodoption....

④Ipreferstayingathome,because;说明理由：

①Thereasonwhy....isthat....

②Itis+被强调部分+that/who+其它部分

③.....makesitpossibleformeto....

④

;1.AnadvantageofhangingoutwithfriendsisthatIcanhavefunwiththem.

2.WhathangingoutattracksmemostisthatIcanenjoytheenvironmentswhicharetotallydifferent.

3.Stayingathomeprovidesmewithmorepersonaltime,whichisgoodformetodevelopmyinterestsandachieveself-improvement.

Inbrief,it’sstayingathomeonweekendsthatholdsagreatplace.OnlyinthiswaycanIenjoymyweekends.;作文二;;写作过程中出现了一下问题：

1.内容安排不合理，原因写的太长P49

Inmyopinion,workingwithothersisnotonlyawayofworkbutalsoasymbolofunity.Also,Ihavelearntalotfromitandmadegreatprogress.ThereasonswhyIputitfirstareasfollows.Firstandformost,onlywhenIworkwithotherscanIbesuccessful.Afterall,“Manyhandsmakelightwork.”Furthermore,workingwithothershelpsmegetadeeperunderstandingofunity.Lastbutnotleast,everytimeIgetsuccessthroughworkingwithothers,therewillbeastrongsenseofachievementandhappinessraisingfromthebottomofmyheart.

;2.建议写的太空，不具体（修改下面的例子)

A.Inordertoimprovethislifeskill,wecandomanythings,suchaseatingfreshfood,havingarelaxbyusingtheInternet,gettingenoughsleepandsoon.

B.Firstly,itisthemostimportanttoeatfoodthatisfreshandnatural,likefruitandvegetables.Secondly,don’treadinthepoororstronglight,oritwillhurtyoureyes.Lastbutnotleast,doingsomeoutdoorsportseverydaycanalsorelaxourselvesalot,justlike

;3.人称混乱，给建议时用I（修改下面的例子)

Inaddition,Idosomesportseverydaytorelaxmyself.What’smore,it’svitalformetogetenoughsleepeachday.

;4.观点表达混乱，错位.原因表达啰嗦，不简洁（修改下面的例子)

ThereasonwhyIthinkwo