武汉大学考博英语 作文点评.pdfVIP

一、金融危机(答题型议论文)

FinancialCrisis

Itisnodenyingthefactthattheongoinginternational

financialcrisishaslandedtheworldeconomyinthemost

difficultsituationsincelastcentury’sGreatDepression.Amass

ofunemployment,housingproblemanddifficultbusiness

conditionsforenterpriseshaveinfluencedourlivesinmany

aspects.Therefore,justasthesayinggoes,A“fallinapit,again

inyourwit”,wemustlearnfromthiscrisisandsparenoefforts

totakesomemeasuretosolvethisproblem.

Actually,therearemanystepswhichcanbeadoptedto

dealwiththisproblem.Firstofall,thegovernmentshould

establishrelevantpoliciestohelpgraduatesandmigrantworkers

findjobsandoffermoregovernment-fundedjobsinpublic

service.Inaddition,anotherwaycontributingtothesuccessof

solvingtheproblemistohelptheenterprisesovercomethe

difficultperiodwiththestructuraltaxcutandtechnical

innovation.Atthesametime,thegovernmentisboundto

increasespendinginhousingprojecttohelpvulnerablegroups

havetheresidenceinbothurbanandruralareas.

Allinall,tosolvetheproblemoffinancialcrisis,boththe

governmentandordinarypeopleshouldjoinhandstocarryout

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effectivemeasures.Asabigresponsibleanddevelopingcountry,

Chinashouldactinanactiveandresponsiblewayduringthis

crisistokeepthesteadyandfastgrowthofitseconomy,and

contributeourpowerforglobalfinancialstabilityandworld

economicgrowth.

评论：写作还是需要使用书面语和适当地使用一些常用

句型，特别是在开头和结尾。建议特别注意词汇的搭配和词

组的使用。Aboveall是“首先”，不是“总而言之”，如果要

表示总结归纳就要换成allinall。

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