书面表达之围绕要点扩充细节.pptxVIP

;书面表达;教学目标： 1. 了解书面表达的重要性： 中考取胜之关键， 继续学习之所需； 2.领会书面表达的步骤。 教学重点、难点： 掌握书面表达发散思维的方法;议一议;作品 1; I had an unforgettable holiday this summer. First, I helped my grandparents with work in the field. It left a deep impression on me. At the same time, I realized that the farmers are hard. Sometimes, we went swimming in the river to the west of the village, and we caught a lot of fish. Suddenly, the dark clouds gathered and it rained heavily. We hurriedly ran up to our house. Although we were wet through, we still enjoyed ourselves. Then, I also helped neighbors’ children with English . I believe this is the best holiday of mine. ;作品2;;文章开头：开门见山，直奔主题? 1)介绍我的家庭，就可以这样开头： I?have?a?very? happy?family.? 或 I?have? a very?special?family?. 2)以健康为主题，我们就可能这样开头： Health?is?very?important?to?all?of?us? 或?Everyone?hopes?to?have?a?healthy?body?等 3) e-mail?的回信，可礼貌地写一句： I’m?very?glad?to?receive?your?e-mail?. 或 Happy?to?get?the?e-mail?from?you?! ;如何发散思维? 1)围绕要点，增加时间 e.g. 外出购物 I’m going out shopping . I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. 2）围绕要点，增加地点 e.g.替小米还书 I have taken the books Xiaomi asked me to return. I have taken me the books Xiaomi asked me to return to the City Library. 3）围绕要点，增加细节;;;; I found some bad behavior.;;Although I was very tired this summer holiday, I felt very happy for what I did. ;;; ; ; Improve it!;参考范文 Dear Peter, I’m writing to ask whether you can do me a favour. I want to have a girl pen friend about 15 years old, I will be happier if she has the same interests as mine. I like traveling very much. So I hope she is interested in traveling, too. If possible, we can travel together or share traveling experiences in our e-mails. I will tell her something interesting about the places that she wants to travel to. I believe I will improve my English by making such a good pen friend . I look forward to hearing from y